Editor: To dream sequence or not

Yes – if it makes sense and fulfills a story need.

No – if it’s just to throw in backstory you can’t let go.

Yes – if blended in coherently.

No – if it’s just stuck there to show the character’s emotional dreaming and the emotion is as clear as mud.

Yes – if part of the character’s make up and is used to give critical information and discovery.

No – if you want it to act like a scene change marker.

Yes – if as your editor I’ve pushed for a no and you won’t budge.

No – if as your editor I’ve pushed for a no and you agreed.

Editor versus author, who wins?

Teamwork doesn’t work that way.